What is your favorite subject in school? Mine sure isn't language arts. Writing is never the
interesting subject in school that I look forward to in school. I enjoy all the
other subjects, like math and science. They are fun to learn. Language arts take
days, or weeks even, to complete. All the process, like writing, drafting and
editing, takes time and effort. The process was already tiring.
I am not the best
writer. In the beginning, all my writing doesn't sound nice or flow at all. The
structure was really messy. My introduction didn't stand out or grab the
reader’s attention at all. It was just like another body paragraph, boring. I
just couldn't fit in synonyms for a lame word. For example, I used the word
“good”. I could have used some other words like “amazing” or “fascinating”, but
no. I wrote essays and narratives that weren't descriptive enough. Adjectives
weren’t used properly or not at all. I had wrong grammar everywhere, in
dialogues or in normal sentences. I wasn't a great writer when I started off!
Now, I’ve learned
many of the skills needed, both in school and with Ms. Reyna. They are really
helping me. My paragraphs flow and sound better because of my choice of
adjectives or verbs. I now put them in the right place and at the right time. I
know how to explode a moment or paragraph, making more exciting. I keep reading
books now and learning new vocabularies so I can easily squeeze in a few “wow
words”. My grammar had improved a lot in the past few months. I learned how to
punctuate dialogues and sentences with Ms. Reyna as well as in school. My
paragraphs and sentences vary in length. They are more descriptive. My
introduction can hook the reader’s attention and hypnotizing into reading my
writing. I can see myself improving in a bat of an eye!
Though my
writings are decent now, I would still like to improve. I want to be the best
writer that I could be. I would like to, besides using adjectives and verbs,
use figure of speech. Similes, metaphors and idioms would be great to put in a
piece of writing. They would make the writing sound a lot better. I would still
like to improve on grammar. I still get mixed up sometimes, and not being able
to make the best out of my writing. The last thing I would like to improve
isn’t actually writing. It’s reading. I like reading, but couldn’t find enough
time. It would benefit my writing, allowing me to use bigger words.
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